I've been coloring this all day, and it was fun...zors.
You know, it's funny, I love how the hair highlights came out, but the way I drew the hair made it impossible to color. Well, impossible to color GOOD, anyways.
What, Latia? Another girl looking into the distance? Another siginifigant red balloon? You're losing your touch.
WATER IS HARD, I'LL NEVER DO IT AGAIN -SOBSOB-
Guys, please, CRITQUE ME CRITQUE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. I don't care if you do a ''''real'''' critque or just leave one in the comments, just critque this bugger.
-- "Drawing smut is a lot easier, because with writing, you have to get down into the nitty gritty. I never want to write the words 'She wrapped her lips around his pulsing member.'
The clouds came out wonderful! and the sky so blue and beautiful. The hair, indeed, the highlights, look good and everythign has a certain flow to it.
The only thing I see is the water. Yes, noticed you didnt have fun doing it, I guess, just make the water a bit clearer? a bit see through? but i mean everythin else looks good. : D its a cute drawing too.
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Wish I could put a spell on you and make you feel like I do ** [link]
The idea is that the water is sort of see-through, only distorted, so that's why you can (sort of) see her legs. But I guess it's not ver clear (lol, puns)
Thanks a lot. C:
-- "Drawing smut is a lot easier, because with writing, you have to get down into the nitty gritty. I never want to write the words 'She wrapped her lips around his pulsing member.'
omg, this is awesome. The only problem I can see that hasn't been pointed out already is that the shading is a little inconsistent. For example, on the girl's left arm, it looks like the light source is to the left or above, and when you look at the right arm, it looks like its coming from the right.
And I lovelovelove that balloon. It's not too transparent, and not transparent all over. Her hair is awesome too.
It's supposed to be coming from directly above, so all the shadows cast downward, but....I don't know, I'm not very good at shading. XD
But thank you for pointing it out. C:
-- "Drawing smut is a lot easier, because with writing, you have to get down into the nitty gritty. I never want to write the words 'She wrapped her lips around his pulsing member.'
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I'll do without.
This flows beautifully, and there isn't much to complain about.
However, the design is a bit simplistic, mostly around her dress.
Still, great job.
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Trust me, I'm one clever cat.
Thanks a lot. C: I appreciate it.
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"Drawing smut is a lot easier, because with writing, you have to get down into the nitty gritty. I never want to write the words 'She wrapped her lips around his pulsing member.'
...oh. Damn."
The only thing I see is the water. Yes, noticed you didnt have fun doing it, I guess, just make the water a bit clearer? a bit see through? but i mean everythin else looks good. : D its a cute drawing too.
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Wish I could put a spell on you and make you feel like I do ** [link]
Thanks a lot. C:
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"Drawing smut is a lot easier, because with writing, you have to get down into the nitty gritty. I never want to write the words 'She wrapped her lips around his pulsing member.'
...oh. Damn."
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Wish I could put a spell on you and make you feel like I do ** [link]
This is undiluted awesome.
And it's quite pretty as well.
Bonza job.
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I adopted a Matsumoto chibi from The-Den
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The only problem I can see that hasn't been pointed out already is that the shading is a little inconsistent. For example, on the girl's left arm, it looks like the light source is to the left or above, and when you look at the right arm, it looks like its coming from the right.
And I lovelovelove that balloon. It's not too transparent, and not transparent all over. Her hair is awesome too.
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Quis custodiet ipsos custodes?
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Quis custodiet ipsos custodes?
But thank you for pointing it out. C:
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"Drawing smut is a lot easier, because with writing, you have to get down into the nitty gritty. I never want to write the words 'She wrapped her lips around his pulsing member.'
...oh. Damn."
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